I am Alexander and I am a 4th grader. I go to saticoy school. My teachers are Mr.wulff and Mrs.geib. I have bane at saticoy school for 4 years. before I came to saticoy I went to kindercare it is a kindergardin school. I am 9 years old my birthday is september, 9th. I have a lot of friends at saticoy school. I like to do math it is my favorite subjet. My favorite thing in math is adding. I like snow globes. I have red, blue, green and yellow snow globes. I have a polarbear snow globe I have 6 santa snow globes.I have a turtle snow globe I have a heart snow globe too. I have a raindeer snow globe the raindeer is a male because it has 2 big horns.I have a lot of pets. I have 3 cats there names are winter, jr jr, and hwon hwon is gray and black jr jr is white gray and brown. I have 3 fish there names are jr, suger, and dot mickey. I have a dog named sooton in English his name is Satan. I have a rabbit named jack,jack he is black, white, and gray.My best friend is my mom.My mom and I we play games. We play soccer together. We watch tv together. We play the wii together to. I love my mom so much.Thank you for reading all about me. Did you like it yes or no. I really liked it. I hope you liked it. It took 3 weeks to right it. I poot a lot of thot in to it. THE END Reader Feedback
Students: Give positive feedback/constructive criticism here!
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Alexander, What school did you go to before you went to Saticoy? What kind of math do you like to do? Adding, subtracting, multiplying, or dividing? Describe one of your snow globes for me, what kind of pictures are in them? Are they from a certain city? Did you get them when you went on vacation? If you did tell me about the vacation! What kind of cats do you have? What color is their fur? If you could go back and answer my questions that would be great! -Heather L.
I enjoyed your personal examples and how the words flowed so well in your essay. Thank you for sharing! -- Mrs. Geib
I am Alexander and I am a 4th grader. I go to saticoy school. My teachers are Mr.wulff and Mrs.geib. I have bane at saticoy school for 4 years. before I came to saticoy I went to kindercare it is a kindergardin school. I am 9 years old my birthday is september, 9th. I have a lot of friends at saticoy school. I like to do math it is my favorite subjet. My favorite thing in math is adding. I like snow globes. I have red, blue, green and yellow snow globes. I have a polarbear snow globe I have 6 santa snow globes.I have a turtle snow globe I have a heart snow globe too. I have a raindeer snow globe the raindeer is a male because it has 2 big horns.I have a lot of pets. I have 3 cats there names are winter, jr jr, and hwon hwon is gray and black jr jr is white gray and brown. I have 3 fish there names are jr, suger, and dot mickey. I have a dog named sooton in English his name is Satan. I have a rabbit named jack,jack he is black, white, and gray.My best friend is my mom.My mom and I we play games. We play soccer together. We watch tv together. We play the wii together to. I love my mom so much.Thank you for reading all about me. Did you like it yes or no. I really liked it. I hope you liked it. It took 3 weeks to right it. I poot a lot of thot in to it. THE END
Reader Feedback
Students: Give positive feedback/constructive criticism here!
For example,
Alexander, What school did you go to before you went to Saticoy? What kind of math do you like to do? Adding, subtracting, multiplying, or dividing? Describe one of your snow globes for me, what kind of pictures are in them? Are they from a certain city? Did you get them when you went on vacation? If you did tell me about the vacation! What kind of cats do you have? What color is their fur? If you could go back and answer my questions that would be great! -Heather L.
I enjoyed your personal examples and how the words flowed so well in your essay. Thank you for sharing! -- Mrs. Geib